Thread:Bluecrash/@comment-30928085-20180915205354/@comment-30928085-20180916035251
I think it reads too much like an advertisement. A page about Journalism shouldn't be focussed on Sagittarius Eye. The main journalistic organization in ED is GalNet and there's already a page about it. You should also add references and a references list. Click on the "insert" button. It will show a drop down list to add references. You can check other pages for examples.
Some categories should be removed such as: "Characters" "systems with in-game descriptions" "alien life" "factions" "minor faction". If it's not a faction in-game or in the official lore then it shouldn't be categorized as that.
You added a list of player staff of Sagittarius Eye to the Journalism page, but they are not mentioned in the official lore. That's more suitable on the Sagittarius Eye page.
You could ask Frontier if they can mention Sagittarius Eye in a GalNet article then it would be an endorsed entity in the lore.
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