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I think it reads too much like an advertisement. A page about Journalism shouldn't be focussed on Sagittarius Eye. The main journalistic organization in ED is [[GalNet ]] and there's already a page about it. You should also add references and a references list. Click on the "insert" button. It will show a drop down list to add references. You can check other pages for examples.

Some categories should be removed such as: "Characters" "systems with in-game descriptions" "alien life" "factions" "minor faction". If it's not a faction in-game or in the official lore then it shouldn't be categorized as that.

You added a list of player staff of Sagittarius Eye to the Journalism page, but they are not mentioned in the official lore. That's more suitable on the [[Sagittarius Eye]] page.

You could ask Frontier if they can mention Sagittarius Eye in a GalNet article then it would be an endorsed entity in the lore.