User contributions for 184.175.29.85

05:5705:57, 25 October 2017 diff hist +40 Missile Rack fixed misinformation (ECM also counters seeker missile)

21:1021:10, 17 October 2017 diff hist +121 Fer-de-Lance added description of canopy view
21:0821:08, 17 October 2017 diff hist 0 Fer-de-Lance fixed abbreviation
21:0721:07, 17 October 2017 diff hist −119 Fer-de-Lance reordered the paragraphs
20:5520:55, 17 October 2017 diff hist +9 Anaconda rewrote description of canopy glass

09:1009:10, 14 October 2017 diff hist −1 Vulture removed unnecessary space
09:0709:07, 14 October 2017 diff hist −279 Vulture removed misinformation about power plant malfunction
09:0409:04, 14 October 2017 diff hist −3 Imperial Courier fixed grammar error
08:4808:48, 14 October 2017 diff hist +158 Cannon fixed grammar error and added more info on PA
08:3608:36, 14 October 2017 diff hist +581 Cannon Overhauled entire write up. Fixed grammar errors. Removed redundant and misleading statement. Reordered the paragraphs. Expanded on comparisons with multi-cannon and plasma accelerator.

00:1700:17, 13 October 2017 diff hist −44 Vulture changed a few diction; moved the paragraphs' order around

20:0520:05, 12 October 2017 diff hist 0 Vulture fixed dysfunctional link
20:0320:03, 12 October 2017 diff hist +450 Vulture added paragraph (defensive capabilities)
19:4319:43, 12 October 2017 diff hist −1 Vulture removed one line break
19:4219:42, 12 October 2017 diff hist −115 Vulture changed some diction and generally trimmed the article
19:0719:07, 12 October 2017 diff hist +25 Vulture expanded on pp malfunction

08:2908:29, 9 October 2017 diff hist +363 Gu-97 added info about tendency to spin after collision
08:2108:21, 9 October 2017 diff hist +53 Taipan fixed misinformation (not made by Faulcon DeLacy)
08:1708:17, 9 October 2017 diff hist +18 Orca viewing angle (not an innuendo)
07:5907:59, 9 October 2017 diff hist +48 Imperial Cutter expanded on price (explicitly states how much it costs)
07:5507:55, 9 October 2017 diff hist +88 Imperial Cutter added info about rank requirement; fixed grammar
07:5107:51, 9 October 2017 diff hist +517 Imperial Cutter added big three comparison
07:3807:38, 9 October 2017 diff hist +41 Anaconda minor change describing cutter and corvette
07:3207:32, 9 October 2017 diff hist −144 Vulture removed unnecessary statement (that any weapon targeting method is viable)
07:2207:22, 9 October 2017 diff hist −16 Anaconda removed redundant statement
07:2007:20, 9 October 2017 diff hist −244 Anaconda general edit to remove redundant statements and improve sentence structures
03:3803:38, 9 October 2017 diff hist +229 Vulture mentioned power plant's tendency to malfunction
03:0903:09, 9 October 2017 diff hist +194 Orca added bridge location

08:0308:03, 8 October 2017 diff hist +4 Orca not weak,
07:0507:05, 8 October 2017 diff hist −124 Dolphin removed redundant statement (mention of luxury cabin exclusivity twice)
07:0307:03, 8 October 2017 diff hist −48 Dolphin minor sentence structure change (nothing meaningful changed)
06:5606:56, 8 October 2017 diff hist +157 Type-6 Transporter mentioned cargo jettison by heat damage
06:2706:27, 8 October 2017 diff hist +127 Orca expanded on combat capability (weak defense)
06:2306:23, 8 October 2017 diff hist −35 Orca removed mention of imperial clipper (sort of jarring)

21:4921:49, 7 October 2017 diff hist +7 Type-9 Heavy fixed grammar
21:4721:47, 7 October 2017 diff hist −308 Type-9 Heavy fixed grammar errors (stop spelling it as manovrability already); rewrote first paragraph to be less subjective
04:2304:23, 7 October 2017 diff hist +13 Anaconda fixed grammar error

22:5922:59, 6 October 2017 diff hist 0 Orca the - its
22:2522:25, 6 October 2017 diff hist +3 Orca minor wording change
22:2322:23, 6 October 2017 diff hist +807 Orca added info about internal compartment limitation and hardpoint location
18:0318:03, 6 October 2017 diff hist +22 Anaconda minor change
18:0018:00, 6 October 2017 diff hist −58 Orca clearly up previous mistake
17:5817:58, 6 October 2017 diff hist −27 Anaconda mentions its lightweight (relatively speaking)
05:2405:24, 6 October 2017 diff hist +4 Orca breaks up the very long sentence in second paragraph.
05:1505:15, 6 October 2017 diff hist −106 Orca cleared up mistake made in last edit
05:1405:14, 6 October 2017 diff hist +276 Orca Cleared up repetitive mention of beluga liner and dolphin; rewritten second paragraph to be less awkward.