Hyperspace: Difference between revisions

Correction of a grammar and a punctuation mistake.
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*** The hyperdrive may misfire, becoming inoperable for a short duration whilst it runs diagnostics, after which it can be initiated again
*** The hyperdrive may misfire, becoming inoperable for a short duration whilst it runs diagnostics, after which it can be initiated again
*** The charging process may generate extra heat
*** The charging process may generate extra heat
** Whilst charging the hyperdrive generates heat
** While charging, the hyperdrive generates heat
* Once the hyperdrive is fully charged it activates:
* Once the hyperdrive is fully charged it activates:
** The appropriate amount of fuel is removed
** The appropriate amount of fuel is removed